Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Day 21: The outline ...

***Check in about senior project --> who is not doing one?***

***Review timeline of essay and in-class visitors.***

Outline work in groups

Writer
  • What are you most proud of in this outline?
  • What do you feel is lacking?
  • List THREE specific areas in which you feel you need some help.
  • Any other global questions you have for the reader?

Reader
  • Review thesis statement for clarity and argumentation
  • Are the topic sentences arguable, specific, and concise?
  • Does the evidence SHOW the thesis/argument?
  • Where and how does the author take steps beyond the obvious?
  • What other global suggestions do you have for the writer?
Group 1: Jonathan, Will, Elizabeth 
Group 2: Lacy, Kraz, Seiichiro
Group 3: Tabby, Evan, Connor S
Group 4: Ian, Andres, Sofia
Group 5: Brodie, Connor M, Sammy
Group 6: Kiki, Gabe, Jack

Once your partner work is done, I would like to check in with students briefly. Then it's work time to flesh out the outline into your first rough draft.

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